wrote this just before lunch.... it's for my architecture presentation tomorrow :) i think it's quite cute what do you guys think? please help me proofread ok!

Tower in the sky

I see a tower
Standing on its toes
In a field of tulips
It stands all alone

Spires in the clouds
But it yearns to know
What lies beyond
This land of gold

So taking a breath
It heaves its body whole
And for a brief eternity
Begins to know

That the endless horizon
Never ceases to grow
And that lack of compression
Is the death of stone